"Oh, Ellya," Winifred said, licking red sauce and tangy pineapple juices from her fingers, "we've been at odds for so long, but I understand now what you've been trying to make us see for so long."
"Let this offering be the continued step forward of our relations," the Queen replied. "The hanging was a good first step, but this? Exquisite, isn't it?"
I mean, it's a shame about the hanging part, but your use of descriptive language isn't bad. Some adult fantasy writers don't manage to be as deliberately evocative, so... good job, I guess.
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I've read worse.
I mean, it's a shame about the hanging part, but your use of descriptive language isn't bad. Some adult fantasy writers don't manage to be as deliberately evocative, so... good job, I guess.
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[sarcasm???? it's a mystery]
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